I hope you like it, I tried to finish it up as fast as I could… but erm…. enjoy XD =^-=

good. a few suggestions:
1.the series is supposed to be in 1st person.
2.when they talked it was a little confusing, try skipping lines.
3.don’t forget that Tyler’s blind. How could he see her to wave to her?
4. luv the idea of a movie!!!!

thnx for sequaling. im glad you had fun! it’s a good story and feel free to sequal any of my stuff, maybe ill continue the series from your story one day!!!

keep writeing!!

srry i only read a little bit of the story not from page 1 so i originally didnt no he was blind but thanx for commenting

welcome! im here to help! lol =]
erin
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LoA

needs editing, but nice fan fiction peice.