awww this story is so cute! I myself always wanted an older brother. I really liked this story its very heart felt and endearing

Very sad and very sweet at the same time. It would be lovely to know that there are people looking out for us, even if we can’t see them all the time. I liked his ‘cloak of purity and mirth’ – very nice turn of phrase there. Well done!

The last seven line of the story made me grin. Very well written. By the way, I wasn’t grinning about the miscarriage part, I was grinning about the rest of the seven lines. :]

very sweet and revelatory. I mean, to think he knows you as his sister even though you were born later.

LoA