Nice. I had not really developed Nick very much. This was a cool turn of events, and i appreciate the sequel and all the comments.
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Oh wow. I swear I do capitalize my “I”s.
Anyway, I wanted to continue to say that Nick’s room mate is interesting. They both are some strange characters, I think. I can’t get the “male” ness down, though.
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“King Kong’s belch..” Funny! I like that your characters have some “busy-ness” that’s not essential but still entertaining.