Oh now there’s a heck of a twist! Very noir, very topsy-turvy, and a cameo for Winston no less. Excellent stuff.
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Wow, an excellent surprise! Apart from a few typos, this is a really great continuation. :-)
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Damn, I think I’ve caught most of them. My excuse for typos and being hypocritical is that I was in a car that broke down in London on Saturday night and didn’t get much sleep as a result. Therefore I blame my tiredness and a faulty clutch entirely.

Haha, in that case I’ve upped my rating for this story and continued with a sequel of my own. :-)
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One more typo (sorry to be a pain): the word “let’s” needs the apostrophe added in your fourth indentation. Other than that minor mistake, it’s really, really good. Great dialogue.
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