Now that freaking rocks. I would never have gone that way, would not have even thought of it. I love it. Brutal, ironic, and befitting our misguided Romeo, seeking love in a captive audience. Hmm, but where to go from here? May take a bit, but I really, really love where you took the little hints of humanity/doubt/remorse I put in the preceding ficlets.
THX 0477
THX 0477