Seductive, vivid, an evocative description of two people being pulled together by forces unknown to them. I love the last stanza, especially ‘irresistibly sweet, like forbidden fruit you can’t ignore, but must reach out to taste and touch’.

‘Forbidden fruit tastes the sweetest’ tehehe. This is really pretty, very descriptive, and mucho fabuloso! I just read the companion to this, so I’m gonna go comment on that one now.

This was absolutely lovely! Nothing else seemed to matter in that moment, not even time. A wonderful capturing of the chemistry between two people.

Thank you for the compliments, and flute faerie, you guessed what inspired it right off the bat: twilight, of course. :p

Wow Ana Cristina. I’m not really one for poems, but I loved it! I find myself thinking about the forbidden fruits of today. Great work, once again.

OMGEEEE !!!! This is such a perfect description of Bella and Edward!!! ( For those of you few who don’t know what I am speaking of, go out right now and get Twilight! {I would suggest that you buy the book, because you may never want to let it go!!!}) I love this!!! Hold on for just one second… runs to other room (AHHHHH!!!! THAT WAS AWESOME PERFECT AHHH !!)
Now then… sorry, very hyper and can’t wait for Breaking Dawn.
Yes, I am VERY impatient.
Fantabulous Ficlet, btw…