Really great sequel, I’ll have to read the whole series. Now that I actually live in Germany, I find the country’s history even more fascinating than before. And to see it depicted in such a creative way is a nice change from the textbook standard.
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I have visited Germany but I didn’t like it, although I may go to Berlin for a weekend sometime this year, see if I just had a bad experience. My sister lives in Austria and I much prefer it there. If you get the chance you should go up to Poland and visit Aushwitz, it’s harrowing but it’s somewhere I think everyone should visit.

I love how the first sentence refers to her as Margie and the last sentence refers to her as Frida. Excellent transition! I’ve never left the United States, personally, but someday I’m going to see the world and I’ve heard so many great things about rural Germany that I just have to see it for myself. :-)
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The word “because” is misspelled” in your second line, and I agree with uselessness, the transition from Margie to her new identity, “Frida,” is extraordinary (confession: when I read the title I half worried Margie’s number was up!).
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One more correction: 4th indentation, second line, there’s an “o” hanging all by its lonesome. I think you meant to write “to.”
Please forgive me for being a pesky editor! :p

Hurrah, I’d already spotted that one and fixed it before I read this. Don’t worry about it, I enjoy being corrected, how else will I learn? I’d rather people read it and pointed it out than just read it and kept quiet.

Very fun interaction between the two, if that sounds right. Solid stuff, all very much in character. And I used to live in Germany, but I only remember gummi bears. It was a long time ago. I’m still kind of bitter about not remembering it.
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