that was great Someday. If I was ever in that situation, I wonder what I would say too. I am not saying I want too, I would hate beyond words to not be able to find the words to talk. I mean I comment like crazy, but to loose my voice because of something that happened to me would be very hard.
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oh wow, thats awesome. great detail, i love the part about the ant.
and great defense, it really fits the challenge, i think
really creative
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Very painful take on the challenge and well done. At first I didn’t like the script style dialog presentation, but it worked extremely well to make the point that you say nothing and really emphasise that fact.
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I love the inner monologue of the main character. Observant and in pain; great work.
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someday- you have a knack for illustrating human emotions. You have a gift of presenting them to the world. You convey such conviction and such expression in your writing. I like how you worked the dialouge between the two characters.. You really know how to connect with your readers. You draw them in and you enchant them with your magical descriptions. Also, you communicate such raw emotion. It’s not often found in this type of writing.

the inner monolouge sort of reminded me of that old tv show, my so-called-life. Claire Danes’s character would narriate the story in a similar style.

This entry is a winner!