Intriguing story. I’m with the bartender wanting to know what happens (time travel is my favorite thing to daydream about). The only line I didn’t quite get was when the bartender says, “Cheer up mate, it might never happen.” How does he know it’s some future problem the guy’s worried about and not something from the past like say his girlfriend cheating on him? Great story, though!

Damn, that bit might not cross the pond so well then. It’s a fairly common phrase that people say to you if you look unhappy in England. Especially strangers in bars.

I agree, though, very nice story starter. I’m a sucker for disaster-laden time travel stories.

Oh, okay. That makes perfect sense then. I’m eagerly anticipating the sequel.

This story really piqued the interest of the reader. The dialouge was real.. I could almost hear them talking. It should definately be followed up with a sequel.

I’m a sucker for time travel stories. I think I had mentioned something about a previous story of yours reminding me of The Time Traveler’s Wife…? If that wasn’t you, sorry, my brain must be going fuzzy. Either way, this is a great start-off point for what looks to be a promising series.
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Yeah that was one of mine. I love time travel quite a bit as well. I still haven’t got round to buying that book and checking it out. I’ll order it now.

Great start to a series.