Very fun and sweet interaction in the middle of bloodshed and violence. I like what it says about human capacity for affection and concern despite desperate times.
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The big paragraph at the top read smoothly with descriptions galore, I really like how you describe things. You have to check out this book called ‘You Suck’ by Christopher Moore. It’s a satire about vampires (get the title? lol) that I think is right up your alley of interest. It has all the cool vampire night stalker stuff of the monster variety, but I swear it’ll make you laugh 1,000 times along the way.

Great writing here. You’re able to handle both horror and pathos (simultaneously, mind you!) quite deftly. And I agree with Tad Winslow, You Suck! is a great, great book. You should check it out.
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Who is going to clean up the mess, I wonder?