Looks good, looking forward to the continuation. :D
She still seems dazed and confused, which is consistent with a head injury.

Frida instinctively wrapped her arms around his shoulders, the only familiar things in this place.
It’s little descriptions like this that make the characters seem so vivid and real. Great writing.
LoA

This is around the best series I have ever read.
The characters are so real, and the discriptions bounce off the screen.
Im excited for the continuation.

Great series.

I would sequel, but I just can’t keep up the same intensity!!!

I really want to see where this goes!

Agree with Ana, killer line. Series duly continued.