Sort of get what you’re talking about, and I can relate, having gone through a few web reincarnations. But it was all kind of jumbled and hard to follow.
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it is meant to be as confusing as possible…..what, with the stalkers and all……you tell me what is a woman supposed to do. You have to be a mind reader if you care to follow me at all, otherwise, you will become one wore-out pup.

Haha, true. But I think what THX was referring to was not so much the structure of your piece, but some confusion regarding verb tense and some curiously mangled idioms. Is English your primary language? Perhaps an editor could help your grammar become a bit more cogent. :-)
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