You set the scene very nicely, very realistic but yet not too boring. Nice work.
There is so much satisfaction in finishing a bunch of sequels in a row and watch my number of ficlets go up. :] Great job. Once again, you have succeeded in widening my vocabulary. Sequel Spree Finished.
There is so much satisfaction in finishing a bunch of sequels in a row and watch my number of ficlets go up. :]
Great job. Once again, you have succeeded in widening my vocabulary.
Sequel Spree Finished.
Nice continuation. Good use of the word Pariah.LoA
Saint Chuck
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