Simple. Concise. Funny.

I need to write something in this vein next week.

Great first effort. Feels good to flex your fiction muscles, doesn’t it?

If I could offer one thought: it seems to end a bit abruptly.

Strictly speaking, you didn’t tell us if they took it with them or not. I love how you’ve got a simple moment with bigger consequences, though. Also, I like funny.

Funny concept and dialouge unique story about grave robbers.