Hilariously funny! I need to get some of my inner Kevin Smith out and write something dialog-driven.

Great effort!

This was really fun in that dark sort of way. I enjoyed it thoroughly! Very funny, great conversation. And perhaps a scary future for both guys.

Anubis is my favorite Egyptian god, so the title piqued my curiosity. I didn’t expect comedy out of this piece! Brilliant.
LoA

Very amusing. Very nice setting, a good example of taking a classic storyline and making it your own.
And I love the last line, keeps it very light.
Keep writing!
—Cat the Dancing Mouse