This does a very good job of fleshing out the caricature fom KG’s story and engendering sympathy for her. very good!

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oooo very good job! i think u nailed mrs robinson’s point of view from kermitgorf’s story.

I like the change of view point from the youngin to the oldin, it gives the whole story, both sides, 360 degrees. Lord knows I’ll still be in high vigor by then, but I probably won’t be barking up any 30 yr old’s tree by then either, if you will. I know my limitations. Good read, thanks.

Incredible see things from the oler womans vantage point. Lonely. Cloris leachman like from The Last Picture Show.. springs to mind with this.
Love the sequel.
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My, my, my! Mrs. Robinson! Very funny.

Quite good!

Poor woman.

Still, a little scary…

I agree with Oreo, still scary. I had pictured her much older, but to a young kid, erm, teen, (sorry guys,) she must seem ancient!
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Take from me, teens think you’re ancient if you’re over 30. I tell my high school students that I’m turning 30 this year, and they’re like: Ohmygod, I’m so sorry. Ah, kids…

haha this is cool!
I like it. its kind of funny…and kind of disturbing?
really well written though. =)