This is good, but the line where Jordan is prompting Tom to remember when Jodi took a long time just getting ready to study with Tom doesn’t make sense to me, because the two really don’t know each other that well yet. Better to write that she took a long time getting ready to study with Jordan or some such thing.
Again, other than that, it’s a fine sequel. Good job.
LoA

Good continuation of the story. I agree with the detail Ana Cristina pointed out. I’ve sequeled.

I loved the idea of Jordan obsessing over the plan.