Wow. Just… wow.

This is part of a larger story / novella – just trying this scene out here at ficlets b4 I include it. Thanks for the feedback…

Awsome,very intense. I love the line “Sam taught me how to give a shit again.” Very well written.

Sam sounds like a rock. sad situation. i agree wow says it all.

Yes, very intense story told in a definite and distinct voice. It will be quite a challenge to keep that up for a larger work.

Amazingly well written! I think it’s a wonderful idea for a longer story, even a novel. The narration is especially vivid in this piece. Great writing.
LoA