I love the sibling rivalry sort of vibe, with the threats. Anything to get out of trouble.
Nicely done. I found the dialog between brother and sister very convincing.
Great job! You actually made your characters sound like two real siblings! Very good, very good! LoA
Great job!
You actually made your characters sound like two real siblings!
Very good, very good!
LoA
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