Jonathan falls in love alot, any more girls and he will carve the tree right down.

I really like the final line. It begs for a sequel, especially because I can’t tell if there’s some foreboding here. The dark part of me wonders what if he’s an obsessive lover marking off his former victims? (Sidebar, Kermitgorf, that commment made me laugh.)

Hey, you are more than welcome to write a sequel. I hadn’t even thought of the dark places this story could go… Interesting!
Oh, and LOL at your comment, too, Scotty. ;-)

Haha, I found this really intriguing. Nice job with it, I hope you don’t mind if I sequel.