okay, but i think you should have kept it a real man. it would have been more interesting.

You could go back and write a sequel to the first piece where it’s a real man: there’s no reason mine has to be the only sequel, and it might not be the “right” sequel. And even if this is the “right” sequel, who says the robot isn’t a “real man” just because he was manufactured somewhere? Perhaps that registration wasn’t wiped by accident…. :)
Part of the beauty of this site is that it opens up possibilities: if I’ve misstepped, you could always be the one who fixes it with a sequel of your own!

I like both ideas. Very creative. Let’s continue this story one way or the other. The only sin would be if it stopped here. Well written.

Ever played the Nintendo game Eternal Darkness…?

There you are and then all of the sudden you character is saying, “THIS CAN ”T BE HAPPENING ” and he’s a zomie or something.

I think that this is where the story should go. Ultra human at first and then that element of Howie’s robot type alternate reality. I like it! I like this stuff too much! Fun! Read my Candlemass story!

I liked the idea of Christians using science to spread the Word of God, rather than doing it themselves.

It’s cool you made him a robot very sci-fi like I Robot. good job.