Fantastic images, especially in this, my favorite line of the entire piece: She stopped in the yard of a nearby house, and ran toward the swing set, tossing her backpack aside, pumping her legs and dipping her toes in the gray clouds above.
LoA

Runaway? No family? The swinging part was really cute.
LoA

awesome beginning, nice descriptions!
can’t wait to see where this goes=]

OH EM GEEE this series is sooo based on the song concrete angel. love it. extremely. : ]
so sad though… :,[

Omg, it is! All the series begins with lyrics from it. Love it so much!!