awww I feel so bad for her. I wish I could adopt her and show her what it is like. You are on a roll Someday!
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I especially like the first sentence. This is very realistic, and you capture the psychology of this abused child quite accurately. It makes sense that she would crawl into an alternate, dreamscape where the pain can’t reach her.
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at least she’s safe there=]

I agree with blusparrow. I just wanna adopt this poor girl. this is so saddd. D,:
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