You boys and your need for violence. Tsk, tsk.
The end is a bit confusing, but I think it works well that way, since it mirrors Jordan’s own befuddlement after waking up, “head spinning.”
LoA

I tried to clean it up a bit and still leave him confused.

Hey, what happened to the stars I gave you?
OK, there we go.

OK, there’s your sequel.

This new version is even better than the first. Awesomeness.

I definitely screwed this one up initially, but in response to the sequel I did a rewrite and am now completely happy with it!