I’ve been reading your stories. They’re pretty interesting. I’m not sure if the ficlets form is working for or against you. They might be better all compiled into one story and divided into chapters or something.

But that’s not the point. I gave this one a two because the last line sounded a little funky to me. I think a colon might have been a better choice than a semi-colon.

I want that candle. I do agree with Shiverfinger that Ficlets isn’t the best place for this series, but c’est la vie.