*autumn
You can edit in some spaces to make it read clearer. Now all grammar issues aside…

I love your adjectives! I think climbing a tree could be an example of seizing the day, if you made it so… And then the last line seems to hint at something more, you must have come up with another idea. :) Focus, and you will write something truly beautiful!
LoA

thanks so muchh for your opinion
And I’ll go fix that now I had a feeling i spelled it wrong :D