While I’m online here posting about my Candle Mass Story, I read this. This reminds me of the song by Erasure called Don’t say you love me. Sorry, my 80’s perspective precedes me. Liked what you wrote very much. Two thumbs up!

thank you! =]]

i like it! the repetition is good and it is a little confusing but still very good! keep writing!=]

I used to hate non-rhyming poems, but you’ve changed my mind. I can agree with this poem, too. Great job!