Woah, time lapse. How many weeks have gone by now?
LoA

I love the actually starting to look like a human being part. Very Mendez. Okay, I’ve got next.

I just fixed the first part to let the reader know a month has passed. I want there to be enough time so that our nancy-boy can get some muscle and grow some more confidence. It’ll be important later on. ;-)

Okay, I have sequeled. It’s now uselessness’s turn to make sense of things.

I love the quick ramp over a period of time that all leads quite neatly to this one moment in embarrassing time as she catches him doing some mirror posing (and really, who among us hasn’t done some of that?)
Loa

This thing is insane right now… I myself know didly-squat about romance (and never quite understood the whys behind it), but I love to see it unfolded by people who appear to know what they’re talking about. Excellent!