How the heck can I sequel this?! Jeez, uselessness, throw me a bone or something – this is too good.
Let me think for a bit… Now that the end is in sight, I don’t want to mess things up.
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Wow, uselessness, just wow. Excellent work. In my mind, I felt like Jodi and Jordan would kiss while the others started fighting and that perversely he would enjoy it like he had never enjoyed anything. Yes, you wrote it exactly as I would have intended. The fit has hit the shan.

And you used the word macabre. That’s 5 stars in my book.

;) Just noticed your inclusion of the ‘bitch’ tag. Very funny.

The fit has hit the shan? Best. comment. ever! LOL
Oh, yeah, you’ve got sequel.
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Your turn (but maybe talk to Ana Cristina first) we’ve got a plan for how to end it. ;) )

Nice job how he sees her for what she is…but still can’t resist the kiss.

screaming cheers for everyone, and no one. In the context of this ficlet and series, that sums up exactly what kind of manipulative bitch she is! Once again, well played.

wow….yeah, she is manipulative! I hate people like Jodi…

I love how you compared Tom and Mendez to gladiators. Very nice :]