I like it, very exciting and ‘fitting’ end to this ficlet. Only thing is I a bit confused about who beat who up. Did Jordan beat Tom up or Mendez?

Not the end! Keep it going! Let me see if I can clear things up. Jordan beat up Mendez.

Wedgie? I laughed out loud. :-P
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OK, I clarified the end a bit. I think I hear Lurch’s unmistakable voice getting closer…

I think I was confused because the line says hit him back Tom. Should it say hit him back Jordan? Also sequel is moments away.

Okay, sequel has arrived!

Jeez, I’m such a doofus. I wrote Tom but I meant Jordan, of course. Thanks! Going to read sequel now. :-)

Your turn again! Looks like you might have the last chapter!
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Okay, now that I’m not in an incredible hurry. My actual comments about it. Perfect title, that line is brilliant and I also cracked up at the wedgie. I love that what I thought was going to be a detour (the gym element) ended up being one of the keys to the series. And yes, I love that our boy is no longer a nancy-boy. He can really take it and deliver it now!

On the edge of my seat, guys. Great stuff.

And Mendez would you quit trying to give me a wedgie I love that line. Not quit giving me a wedgie, but quit trying to give me a wedgie. Even funnier.

This is a very funny story you all are penning, nice installment here Ana. I’m going back to read from the start.

The title snagged me on this one! I laughed out loud. I loved the line “demonic cheerleader”. Great job!