This is raw, a battle, it flows unceasing like an angry ocean, tossing the reader from tidal wave to tidal wave of analogies and opposites. It’s true to form. And full of emotion. Some spaces would have made it easier to read, but overall, it’s good. I love the line : “Cursive words of terrible innocence mar the white skin of blank pages” LoA
Mistress Elsha Hawk