I love it, as usual. Their conversation is perfect and I especially like the part where Pizza Face says, “You’re not sniffing glue in here, are you?” What a character. And Jodi’s response was quite nice as well. Now, let’s tie up a few other loose ends, I guess it’s Ana Cristina’s turn in the rotation. (Hint, hint).
Homosexual overtones??? Best tag ever! Missed that the first time through. I kind of felt that vibe, but wasn’t gonna say it. How funny. No wonder he gave him the book ;)
I agree, Pizza Face’s ended up being quite the character. I’m writing a sequel right now. :p Oh I hadn’t seen that tag! uselessness, you’re the best at coming up with wacky tags. I’m going to have to work that into my sequel somehow… LoA
Funny ending. I don’t think anyone pegged Jordan and Lurch going out for coffee while the other two nursed wounds outside by the pond. Very fun stuff. And what’s wrong with homosexual overtones?
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