Aww!! That made me almost teary at the end. Free verse all the way!LoA
I’m a big believer in free verse, and this was free verse at its loveliest. I really like the simplicity of it. Great!LoA
I think verse is dangerous and should be locked with as little freedom as possible. I feel the same away about yappy lap dogs. That aside, I thought this was lovely, an ode to the shy, would-be lover. Goodness knows I’ve been there enough times.LoA
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♠Ana Cristina♥
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