Yes! WOOT ! Good sequel! =)
LoA

yeah!! cute!! sequel…?

psssshhh.
YOU KNOW there will be a sequel Nissakit.
:]]

I like this. Nice simple, human moments between people, told in a straightforward way. Two suggestions: one is that a little more action or noticing of details between the conversation would be good—how Ethan laughed, and Faith’s reaction to noticing it, instead of just that he laughed, for instance. Also, reading Faith’s thoughts at the start, as if we’re inside Faith’s head, and then reading ’”…” Faith said’ on the next line is a bit jarring. But that’s following the series, so not your fault!:)

thanks for your suggestions, i’ll try to work them into my next sequel.