Comments on A cloud of Happyness by Blusparrow

Blusparrow

Ever since I have seen Pursuit of Happyness I always but a Y in happyness. My title wasn’t an accident, I wanted it that way.
LoA
- Posted 2009-01-12 04:02:28.
Blusparrow

Ever since I have seen Pursuit of Happyness I always but a Y in happyness. My title wasn’t an accident, I wanted it that way.
LoA
- Posted 2009-01-12 04:02:28.
Blusparrow

Ever since I have seen Pursuit of Happyness I always but a Y in happyness. My title wasn’t an accident, I wanted it that way.
LoA
- Posted 2009-01-12 04:02:28.
Tad Winslow

Happyness makes more sense, English is such a difficult biaatch sometimes, excuse my portugese. This is a cute story. I like how the dialogue is text—that’s original. I just got my cell phone bill and my trexts are out of control, lol. A few grammar issues in the first paragraph but I’ll leave that up to your teacher to wrinkle her brow over.
- Posted 2009-01-12 04:02:28.
Freedom

Totally agree with Tad. Lovw the text convo….must read the sequel.
LoA
- Posted 2009-01-12 04:02:28.
howhardlifeis

aww cute….reading on..
- Posted 2009-01-12 04:02:28.