Funny and with a great conclusion. I love it how it is. I might not have made the word man bold and capitalized. I think the story stands well on its own without having to do that. But like I said, I enjoyed it!
Thank you! And I agree… the bold and the caps may be a bit much. I think I’ll change it when writing from Cassie’s view point next time.
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