Very emotional story and I love the hero saving not just the day, but her life. I don’t know how many times I’ve heard about someone in a dire spot and somebody either called or prayed or showed up and got them through it and all as a response to some feeling they had. Very relatable story.
On the grammatical side of things, you left the word ‘phone’ out of 2 sentences in the 1st paragraph. Her began to vibrate and Her began to ring.
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