Comments on She And Him by Seth Miller

Seth Miller

Before I get any questions, ratings or comments I’ll say that the title and the first line come from the Zooey Deschanel-led musical act “She And Him” and their tune “Why Do You Let Me Stay Here?”.

It’s not much of a tale in terms of action or description, but today is sunny and writing this story made me incredibly happy, just like the song when I listen to it.

I do my “Ficlet Friday” to learn, but also to have some fun.

This was FUN !
- Posted 2009-01-12 04:05:08.
thebetweenspace

I really enjoyed the exploration of lover’s in the afterglow. Great story!
- Posted 2009-01-12 04:05:08.
I LOVE FRANK IERO AND WILLIAM BECKETT!!!

Great job I really love it!
- Posted 2009-01-12 04:05:08.
Bartimaeus

mmm i am kinda a pushover for romance, so I liked it =)
- Posted 2009-01-12 04:05:09.
TatianaMik

I like it.
- Posted 2009-01-12 04:05:09.
Sailor Emo

awwwww! This was so cute and one of the best “tempered” mature ficlets that I’ve ever read!
- Posted 2009-01-12 04:05:09.
Ms Kit Kat

great story
- Posted 2009-01-12 04:05:09.
Angelwingstofly

great story :) i love the feeling when you fall in love with someone
- Posted 2009-01-12 04:05:09.
Will Hindmarch

I felt uncomfortable reading this, because it was so genuinely intimate that I felt like a voyeur. In other words: excellent.
- Posted 2009-01-12 04:05:09.
Nouvelle Bardot

i love that song ♥
- Posted 2009-01-12 04:05:09.
Mistress Elsha Hawk

young, sweet, like a honeymoon, or first love, discovering those moments of “shared fortune” in sharing each other. :)
- Posted 2009-01-12 04:05:09.
Phil Sporlan

I like it so much I might do a sequel
- Posted 2009-01-12 04:05:09.