Being very new to this forum, I was not sure about the “mature” rating. When in doubt, error on the safe side. Please provide feedback to me about that. Thanks

mm very well described kiss scene, grasping every bit of the sensation

That’s okay not to mark mature.

But Oh, I love it!!

This is very seductive and intimate. You captured the moment well.
LoA

it has a poetic feel to it. Every second is described with intensity