I absolutely love that last sentence. Beautiful, beautiful imagery here, though one minor correction: where you write “trac the tracks,” did you mean to write “trace the tracks”?
Other than that it’s perfect. I’d give you ten stars for this if I could!
LoA

Other than the one slip into past tense in the first sentence, a really nice, trippy sort of artistic exploration/thought process. Makes me want to paint. And I’m not really good at painting!
DreamerChallenge
Day 2

Quite poetic. I agree with Ana C. —fantastic imagery.