I like this. Very different. You twisted the rules, but hey, it’s writing. There are no rules. I like the repetition of the “decree”
Ah, it had to be a dream. Nice way to tie the start to the end.
oh, so sad, it was just a dream! bummer! And great round story, tying it all up.
Louise Madison
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