Neat idea and good use of the deja vu phenomenon for excellent, quiet creepy factor in your little story. Great job on the challenge!
yikes! horrifying! to accidentally revisit a home with Your memories inside? The ones you tried to forget? sub-conscience win out.
Oh my gosh, I am completely covered in goose-bumps after reading that. This is my favorite entry in the challenge, hands down.LoA
Wow…That gave me the shivers when I read Kim’s thoughts. Talk about her bad luck. Excellent job. Thank you very much for entering!
Very nice use of the deja vu, and definitely creepy! I also liked the abrupt transition from the excited tone of the beginning, to the horrified tone of the end.
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