The imagery here is breathtaking. It’s so vividly described and sets the scene so well I feel almost guilty reading it, as though I’ve come upon something I shouldn’t be witnessing. It stays with you long after you finish reading it.
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I concur. What a fantastically vivid scene.

I was in a strange mood last night – it came out in this ficlet. Thanks for the feedback, you two. I appreciate it.

The descriptions r lovely & the scene dark and ominous. What happens next?

Very nice touch, linking the fragile, wind-blown existence of the dandelion seed with her fugitive (?) status. Great job!

I liked what you did with the metaphor, so I tried to emulate it in a sequel and maintain the style and theme. A fun little writing exercise, for which I thank you.

I’m used to your comic side.. this was was deepest/ darkest thing I think you’ve written, I agree with the vivid imagery.

I just wanted to let you know I continued the series you started. As THX wrote in a comment in one of the more recent parts, it’s cool to see what happens when many hands touch a story.
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Cool, Ana Cristina, I’m off to read your continuation now… Thanks for continuing it!

A masterful usage of words to create imagery. I’m hooked!

You are a master ficleteer!

Thanks, Hunting Beauty – you’re too kind!

Loved it!