I’m digging this little story. Feels like you’re actually going somewhere rather than just putting small scenes together.

As an aside, is one curse word really grounds for marking something mature? I’m very curious as I usually have my characters curse in my writing, and having to mark it mature every time seems a little… wrong.

I wasn’t sure about the cursing, so I figured I’d go with better safe than sorry, at least with the f-bomb. Thanks for the comment and the rating!

Again, great piece, I love the way you are moving the store forward.