ominous. The harsh language seems to fit, well written keeping with the original story.

Ooh, not a turn I expected, taking it in a sort of mystical direction which is interesting. Always fun to see what happens when a lot of hands touch a story.
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Yes, an unexpected turn to me as well but I do like it – well written and pregnant with possibilities… Gr8 Work!

OK, I have been loosely following this series. I just wrote a sequel. Don’t know if it fits in, but here it is.
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