Twisted and macabre take on life in the factory. Very disconcerting, which I’m assuming was the intent, so well done on that front. I think you missed a ‘the’ in that first sentence maybe?

Thanks. I originally wrote this in Word and pasted it over.

Wow 1024 characters is not much. I was forced to edit it down quite a bit. But I had to still get the “mechanics” of the story in there. Thanks for the rating and the typo catch.