mysterious, literate,well done, fascinating action packed and full of love for chloe. impressive piece.

Heya Kermitgorf… I really wish that the people working on this site would make it possible to actually reply to comments so that I didn’t have to make these goofy greetings at the top of my replies. Anyway, thanks very much, I’m glad that the action comes across as much as the emotion; it was a tough goal to match up to when I had the idea.