Oooo! Cliffhanger!

very nicely written. Im very excited for the sequel (pleasepleasePLEEEASE???)

Great scene and feeling between the two men. Wonderful set up for a story as a stand-alone ficlet.
LoA

Great piece. Like Pen Name says, definitely deserves some follow-up.

Nice piece and I agree, great cliffhanger.

Very nicely done with the laments of someone who thinks his job is pointless losing validity in a moment of sheer terror