Suspenseful.. some highbrow dark humor in this,but over all not like any series you’ve written, i am very impressed. you remain the highlight of my ficlets experience.

I like the banter between the two characters and the ending keeps you on your toes. And the plot (in the entire series) has a way of keeping you guessing.

the images are so vivid

Very excellent work. PyroPunk is right, the images are very vivid. It’s like I’m there watching and listening to everything without anyone even knowing I’m there.