Brilliant! This is a perfect example of what this medium can do. I loved the last line. Although I’m getting more of a Quantum Leap feel than Memento to this.
Thank you all. And yeah, I’ll admit proudly to a certain Quantum Leap-ness to it. I hadn’t thought of Memento when I wrote it, but I think that is in there as well.
Ok, I had to write a sequel to this. It doesn’t quite live up to the original, but I just couldn’t let the idea die. It was such an interesting little piece that I had to expand on it. I hope you like it.
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